Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, December 12, 2007
End Of Year Reflection
Well this year I went to Fendalton school and I done some fun stuff like gymnastics and muesum. One of the best things about this year was athletics because the events are were awesome and I made it into relays and sprints and we got to miss out school time because we were at zones and centrals but one of my proud moments were winning t-ball first term, we got a trophy until term 4 for our school t-ball team and we got maedals each for winning.
Monday, December 10, 2007
Sunday, December 2, 2007
Rugby world cup 2007
Why the All Blacks should have won
The All Blacks should have won against France in this devastating event, keep reading to find out more
It was 2007 and the rugby world cup was on, during one of the game Dan Carter injured his leg so it put New Zealand to a disadvantage.
New Zealand made it to the quaterfinals and were vsing France. The game had started and we were in the lead. Later in the game the referee was awarding penalties to France even though New Zealand done nothing wrong and the referee didn’t count one of New Zealand’s trys.
At the end of the game we lost 18 – 20 to France and everyone was disappointed about the game and judge. Richie McCaw was interveiwed at the press conference after the match, upset and angry and everyone else who saw the game and the video refferees actions were gutted.
Why didn’t the coach see that try we made, why were they awarding so much penalies. I think that the english refferee was supporting France team more than us because he made a bet or he just liked France more than us.
I think that the referee likes France more than New Zealand or thinks New Zealand wins too much and as a consequence to his stupid actions juring the game I think he should lose his job or be suspended for some time.
Now that I have told you what I think of the game and why New Zealand should have won, what do you think?
The All Blacks should have won against France in this devastating event, keep reading to find out more
It was 2007 and the rugby world cup was on, during one of the game Dan Carter injured his leg so it put New Zealand to a disadvantage.
New Zealand made it to the quaterfinals and were vsing France. The game had started and we were in the lead. Later in the game the referee was awarding penalties to France even though New Zealand done nothing wrong and the referee didn’t count one of New Zealand’s trys.
At the end of the game we lost 18 – 20 to France and everyone was disappointed about the game and judge. Richie McCaw was interveiwed at the press conference after the match, upset and angry and everyone else who saw the game and the video refferees actions were gutted.
Why didn’t the coach see that try we made, why were they awarding so much penalies. I think that the english refferee was supporting France team more than us because he made a bet or he just liked France more than us.
I think that the referee likes France more than New Zealand or thinks New Zealand wins too much and as a consequence to his stupid actions juring the game I think he should lose his job or be suspended for some time.
Now that I have told you what I think of the game and why New Zealand should have won, what do you think?
Wednesday, September 19, 2007
Sunday, September 16, 2007
Speech evaluation
Speech topic:lollies
time:2.17
I thing that i was good but i could do better next time by making my speech longer and memorise it more so i want stop and think about whats next
time:2.17
I thing that i was good but i could do better next time by making my speech longer and memorise it more so i want stop and think about whats next
Thursday, July 26, 2007
SLC
Introduction-2min
Hi everyone, this is my SLC (Student Led Conference about what I have learnt this year and what I am proud of.
Writing-Retell-10min
Maths-Prime numbers-2min
Poems-cobra,vechicles,nature-5min
Language-If I learnt new words-3min
Tech-New computer and internet skills-8min
Ending-Cya-2min
Hi everyone, this is my SLC (Student Led Conference about what I have learnt this year and what I am proud of.
Writing-Retell-10min
Maths-Prime numbers-2min
Poems-cobra,vechicles,nature-5min
Language-If I learnt new words-3min
Tech-New computer and internet skills-8min
Ending-Cya-2min
Letter to Denzil
168 Clyde Rd
Fendalton
Christchurch
New Zealand
Sup Denzil, I’m Alvin
Hey, I was reading the book you were in and I thought it was awesome. You should also try to take a bath or shower or you’ll smell bad.
Can you please write me a spell to get money and guns so I can buy things and shot things because its fun. I have a qustion, why are u bad at your sums? If you went to school you could get better at it.
Whats it like turning in to a rat and going through peoples food and clothes?Is there still war in the medival times? If there is can you send the sword as well?
P.S You smell a bit bad
Yours sincerely, Alvin
Fendalton
Christchurch
New Zealand
Sup Denzil, I’m Alvin
Hey, I was reading the book you were in and I thought it was awesome. You should also try to take a bath or shower or you’ll smell bad.
Can you please write me a spell to get money and guns so I can buy things and shot things because its fun. I have a qustion, why are u bad at your sums? If you went to school you could get better at it.
Whats it like turning in to a rat and going through peoples food and clothes?Is there still war in the medival times? If there is can you send the sword as well?
P.S You smell a bit bad
Yours sincerely, Alvin
Red Riding Hood
Once upon a time a girl named Red Riding Hood was at her house, practicing her shooting because the wolf had ate her granny. Unfortunately the was got shot and died and we managed to get her out. That was a week ago so nothing bad should go bad for a while. The next day Red Riding Hood woke up and said
“Wow! Todays a wonderful…” The phone started to ring.
“Who could that be?” Red Riding Hood wondered
It was her granny, she was very ill so she told her to get the antidote.
Off she goes on her bike but when she steps out the door she thought of her granny being swallowed so she went back inside and got her grenades, pistols rifles and her shotgun and shoved it in her bag. While she was getting her things a big white object appeared outside her house She quietly got out her pistol and. . .
“FREZZE” She shouted
No one was there so she took off on her bike. BANG, BOOM BOOSH! She stopped, her house exploded.
“Noooo!” She screamed, she forgot the antidote, suddenly something flying fell from the sky and landed in her hands
“At least something good happened”Red said
It was the antidote. She took off happily and let the fire burn like noting happened. Along the way she saw a white thing like the one outside house so she hit the brakes.
“Hey!” Red Riding Hood shouted the thing ran towards the bushes but it wasn’t very fast. She pulled out her pistol
“FREEZE!” She shouted
“OKAY!” Replied the white thing
“Who are you?” Red Riding Hood wondered
“I’m Humpty Dumpty” He said
“Why were you running away from me?” She said
“Because you were about to run me over” He lied
“You’re wasting my time!” She answered
“Wait, I know a shortcut!” Humpty replied quickly
“Which way?” She wondered
“To your left” He said
“Sucker” He said under his breath then Red Riding Hood rode off.
She took the left, it looked like a long way but she still rode on, suddenly these random people started shoting in front of her so she jumped off, got out her pistol and shot them all in the head apart from one and then…
“Wah! Out of ammo!” Red Riding Hood
A random guy then shot her through the arm
“Ouch!” she said
She dropped her gun and tried to get her rifle but got shot again so she tackled him, then got out the rifle and killed him.
“Why the heck didn’t I do that before”She shouted
Finally She got to the house the house.
“Hello” Red said
“I’m here” said granny
So she walked though the lounge to the bedroom
“Oh hi granny, oh what happened to your ears?” Red said
“They got chopped off” Granny replied
“What happened to your eyes?” Red said
“They shrunk” Granny replied
“Why do you smell like rotten eggs” Red said
“I’m an egg!” Granny shouted
She jumped out of bed and tried to tackle her but Red Riding Hood got out her shotgun and shot his head. BANG! Egg yolk went everywhere and she knew he was an egg because he wasn’t wearing granny’s clothes and granny was on the couch. She also didn’t want to waste the yolk so she had scrambled eggs for lunch.
The End
“Wow! Todays a wonderful…” The phone started to ring.
“Who could that be?” Red Riding Hood wondered
It was her granny, she was very ill so she told her to get the antidote.
Off she goes on her bike but when she steps out the door she thought of her granny being swallowed so she went back inside and got her grenades, pistols rifles and her shotgun and shoved it in her bag. While she was getting her things a big white object appeared outside her house She quietly got out her pistol and. . .
“FREZZE” She shouted
No one was there so she took off on her bike. BANG, BOOM BOOSH! She stopped, her house exploded.
“Noooo!” She screamed, she forgot the antidote, suddenly something flying fell from the sky and landed in her hands
“At least something good happened”Red said
It was the antidote. She took off happily and let the fire burn like noting happened. Along the way she saw a white thing like the one outside house so she hit the brakes.
“Hey!” Red Riding Hood shouted the thing ran towards the bushes but it wasn’t very fast. She pulled out her pistol
“FREEZE!” She shouted
“OKAY!” Replied the white thing
“Who are you?” Red Riding Hood wondered
“I’m Humpty Dumpty” He said
“Why were you running away from me?” She said
“Because you were about to run me over” He lied
“You’re wasting my time!” She answered
“Wait, I know a shortcut!” Humpty replied quickly
“Which way?” She wondered
“To your left” He said
“Sucker” He said under his breath then Red Riding Hood rode off.
She took the left, it looked like a long way but she still rode on, suddenly these random people started shoting in front of her so she jumped off, got out her pistol and shot them all in the head apart from one and then…
“Wah! Out of ammo!” Red Riding Hood
A random guy then shot her through the arm
“Ouch!” she said
She dropped her gun and tried to get her rifle but got shot again so she tackled him, then got out the rifle and killed him.
“Why the heck didn’t I do that before”She shouted
Finally She got to the house the house.
“Hello” Red said
“I’m here” said granny
So she walked though the lounge to the bedroom
“Oh hi granny, oh what happened to your ears?” Red said
“They got chopped off” Granny replied
“What happened to your eyes?” Red said
“They shrunk” Granny replied
“Why do you smell like rotten eggs” Red said
“I’m an egg!” Granny shouted
She jumped out of bed and tried to tackle her but Red Riding Hood got out her shotgun and shot his head. BANG! Egg yolk went everywhere and she knew he was an egg because he wasn’t wearing granny’s clothes and granny was on the couch. She also didn’t want to waste the yolk so she had scrambled eggs for lunch.
The End
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